Please make your post and comment here for this week (10/21-10/27).
The post should be a 1-paragraph revison of what was written down on the pink paper slip you got.
(NOTE 1. 貼文為改寫後的文章，不是課堂上的評論！)
(NOTE 2. 未出席同學請參考雜誌 p.10-12，並針對該議題完成新文章！)
Besides, you are supposed to
- rewrite the short passage with both grammatical and organizational errors corrected
- include at least 2 wrods in your revision from the word list below
- ample
- amend
- accelerate
- back up
- beef up
- robust
- lay out
- tax
- dormant
- navigate
- mop up
- on the go
- tap into
- output
- dementia
- neuron
- spatial
- composition
Let me know if you need help or have questions.
Wendy
Topic:Eat more fruits and vegetables.
ReplyDeleteAmple fruits and vegetables are healthy to our bodies.They can make the functions of our bodies,such as circulation works well,and mope up some damages caused by free radicals.They also offer some essential materials for our bodies.
Fruits and vegetables are so important that we can't live without them.Therefore,we should eat more fruits and vegetables.
Leana 高儷芬
Topic:Eat more fruits and vegetables.
ReplyDeleteTo be a healthy man, everyone should eat ample fruits and vegetables every day. We all need the nutrition from the fruits and vegetables, which can keep our body in a good condition and mope up some damages caused by free radicals. So do not just eat what you like, keep you diet balanced.
Carol 張靜茹
Topic:Join clubs or organizations that need volunteers.
ReplyDeleteIn order to prevent dementia, seniors join clubs or organizations that need volunteers. In this way, they won’t feel unneeded and lost after they retire through volunteering.
Society activities is so important for seniors as we need classmates' and friends' relationships at school and groups. On one hand, it can beef up our social abilities and helps others or gets others’ help. On the other hand, it can elevate yourself-evaluation form the process, because there are a lot of people need you and like you.
In addition, maybe you will get more friends who are in the same camp as you had been a old man during join clubs, and train your brain to stay sharp further become more younger both in physiology and psychology.
Shelley 林姿瑩
From the topic ( Leana ): eat more fruits and vegetables is good for our health.
ReplyDeleteI think the fluency of this paragraph is good.
Propose main opinion (fruits and vegetables are healthy to our bodies)--->Why it is so important (robust the main idea)--->"Therefore”(emphasize the importance again to echo the article)
But maybe you can layout more details like real examples or experts’ views to trap people’s attention.
Shelley林姿瑩
Topic:Develop a hobby or two.
ReplyDeleteWhen we concentrate on doing something that we really love to do, we can enjoy the moments and we feel comfortable and pleasure.
So,developing a hobby or two can relax our brain.For example, I like to write caligraphy.When I write caligraphy, I can pay all my attention to every my breath and I can feel the tranquility in my mind.The feeling is just like meeting another myself.
In a short nut, if we develop a hobby, we would ward off dementia and accelerate our thinking,and even we can have a peaceful composition.
Annie,彭雅玟
Topic: Travel
ReplyDeleteYou are forcing your brain to navigate a new and complex environment.
For example, before we go to travel, we need to use paper maps or searching electric one on internet, to figure out all places you want to go. Making a time schedule is also a good way to train your ability of organization. And when you are traveling, there are many novel, ample things and people, waiting for your discover.
To sum up, there are many advantages about traveling. What are your waitings for? Just go and make fun by travel!!
And I want to give some comments to Annie彭雅玟:
I think that her topic is very fluency and her example is very special, which is talking about Chinese painting, calligraphy. But I don’t know her last sentence “even we can have a peaceful composition“mean?
Yuki 張郁琦
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ReplyDeleteTopic:Take classes throughout your life
ReplyDeleteI think it's never too late to learn. Knowledge is infinite. We can learn more things from many sources nowadays. If we try to take some classes throughout our life can not only prevents us far away from dimetia but also gains more entertianments in our lifetime. For example,taking computer lessons, by doing so,we can tax our brain to think and learn.Besides,if we are good at computers, we can use those technologies in career and life,such as designing our projects or leting us get more information from internet.
In short,the more we use our brain, the more probabilities for us to keep away from dementia.
李玥瑩 (Clair)
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ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteTopic: Develop a hobby or two
ReplyDeleteDevelop hobby is very important in your life. People always have the time feel themselves bored. This time you should have some hobbies to beef up the other ability that you interested it. When you implement your interest, you will use some methods to make them better. At the same time you keep think in the relax situation. Keep think can help train your brain to stay sharp and it can avoid get dementia on you.
kyo, 許育民
Gardening has very good results to the function which improves your brain, including back up your intelligence and robust your physical power.by joseph
ReplyDeleteTopic: get enough sleep. Studies have shown a link between interrupted sleep and dementia.
ReplyDeleteSleep enough is good for health, we can obtain enough spirit to start a day, and do
many things ,we can avoid our body working overtime to decrease a lot of diseases
we might get, not only in positive but also in negative .
If we don’t have enough sleep , we may feel tired all the day and we can not concentrate on anything what may cause a lot of faults, not to mention to keep our brain “sharp” .
alex 蘇蔚鴻
Topic: Start gardening
ReplyDeleteMy mother has joined a gardening class for few years.
She easily got nervous before.
She has learned how to stay calm since she became a gardener.
From laying out a garden, she not only exercises regularly but also reduces stress in the daily life.
After reading this article,I told her that gardening can help ward off Dementia.
She was excited and tried to convince me of joining the gardening class.
But I say no.^_^
Jessica 林瑞音
Comment:(to Clair's post)
ReplyDeleteRecently,I join a computer class .Education appears to help my brain to stay sharp.
As far as I am concerned,we need to keep thinking.From the moment we are born to the moment we die we never stop learning.
Life is a process of continual change and, in order to make sense of the changes as we progress through life, we need to keep learning.And, it’s true that our brains need a regular workout just as much as our bodies to help us keep both mind and body in shape.
Jessica 林瑞音
I want to post a comment to Yuki^^
ReplyDeleteI enjoy reading your passage.
First, I want to analize you pattern organization.
You use the General-examples(the second line), time order(also the secind line),and summary(the last second line "to sum up" is an obvious traffic sign).
Next,I would like to talk about my thoughts about travel.Travel to different countries is the most effective way to beef up our language abiliy.Because we are in the environment, we have numerous opportunities to talk in the language.Besides, when we travel, we have ample time to do what we like to do.It can release our stress.In short, travel can really sharp our brain.
Annie彭雅玟
Like learning English, we can use Chinese to help us recite them.For example,"song" this word pronounces like Chinese word "送".It's easy to keep in mind.We can learn faster and better by doing so.
ReplyDeleteStanley 賀祥
Topic：Join clubs or organization
ReplyDeleteDetail：You can join some activity to socialize with other people. You can chat about different thing form different people, to beef up your common sense, and you will have a very robust brain. You can have more friend by Join clubs or organization, you can do activity, have more experience. After retirement, you will have some to do, it will lend you not to feel lost and unneeded, and you can lay out the new life by yourself.
劉威廷
Topic: (Practicing writing with your non-dominant hand several minutes every day)
ReplyDeleteThere’s a common sense that you can beef up the brain which is the opposite side to your dominant hand. For instance, if you’re a righty, then you may good at learning、logical analysis、calculate and you’re likely to be an emotional animal, since the left brain control these functions. On the other hand, once you “forget” to use your left hand, the right brain can not performs as well as the left brain.
The best way is to use both of your dominant and non-dominant hand in your daily life, by doing so, the dormant parts of the brain can be ”woke up” .If you feel unacquainted with your non-dominant hand , get used to it, and you’ll get process day by day.
Rita 曾思蒨
Topic: Learn a new language
ReplyDeleteDuring learning a new language, you will make your brain go back and forth between one language and the other, because you should connect the words you have learned as well as the word you have not learned before and you will to think about what are the same or differences between a new language and the old one you have learned and then you will beef up it. Through the process, you will accelerate the development of a robust brain, and delay symptoms of dementia.
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ReplyDeleteTopic:Read and write daily
ReplyDeleteThe best way to take care the brain is to think, use it and let the brain always active. Reading and writing daily seems difficult and heavy. Yet it does not mean people have to do it as homework of school, this is more like and habit before sleep that can be easily complete, for example, writing diary, reading poem, etc. Bring up this habit will stimulate an ample areas that process and store information of brain and prevent dementia for sure.
許耿豪, Stanley
Comment of Jessica’s post
ReplyDeleteReduce stress is a necessaryto have robust health. It’s good to know your mother amend from the illness and is more bright than before. By the way, about your article, I think you can use more connective instead of period, combine the sentence with relation will let the composition more smooth.
許耿豪, Stanley
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ReplyDeleteTopic:Eat with company at least one meal a day.
ReplyDeleteEating alone may cause you to eat unhealthy food or eat in unhealthy way. I sometimes eat cookies for lunch or spend only three minutes to finish my dinner when I eat alone or on the go, and it's not healthy at all. Eating slower to spend some times socialize, or have a better meal with my friends or family will be much more healthier. And to avoid dementia, eat healthy is definitely necessary .
Stephen 王信夫
Topic:Good hobbies make your brain sharp.
ReplyDeleteGood hobbies benefit us a lot.These not only help you develpoe a robust brain ,but beef up your healthy as well.For example,learning a new musical instrument can stimulate your brain,although it may be harden than when you were a kid.Or you can travel everywhere if your economics available. Traveling is also a good way to ward off dementia,because you have to lay out the plan before the trip,and tap into the internet to collect some information useful…..and so on,all you do like these let your brain always be on the go.However,it probably cost your los of money.All in all,developing hobbies is one way to make your brain sharp and active.
Tony 鄭志永
Topic: Get enough sleep
ReplyDeleteIt's a truth to worry that many students stay up all night to play computer games, study, or do something isn't important at all.
But in order to let your body obtain ample rest and to keep your brain conscious, to get enough sleep is very important and necessary.
Since study is the most important responsibility for students, as students, we have to finish our work before we go to play.
So, the things we should do is finishing the homework before we spend time in vain, and not to go to bed after midnight.
After following the methods, I believe that we all can own a robust body and a sharp brain.
Amy, 簡孜芸
I want to leave a comment to Jassica's post.
ReplyDeleteIt's good to know that your mother really obtained some benefit from the gardening class, and the example encouraged me to try the tips to ward off dementia.
In addition, I think you should say "yas" to your mother! She will get more pleasure and confidence from the class if you back her up ^^
Amy, 簡孜芸
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ReplyDeleteTopic: Take dance lessons.
ReplyDeleteDancing is a physicial activity that can decrease the incident of dementia.
Dancing is a socialized activity that we can have a connection with others. When we are dancing, we can accelerate our brain by remembering the dance steps while having a conversation with others.
Besides, we might use any part of our body when we dance, and thus we may have the chances to beef up our dormant part of brain.
As a result, dancing is a good way to decrease the risks of getting dementia.
陳韻絜,Cindy
Topic: Read and write daily.
ReplyDeleteThese activities stimulate a wide variety of brain areas that process and store information.
The variety of brain's activites include reading and writing daily, that process and store information.
Daily is an composition of memory about things, also support me to reduce the same fault.
After all, using other methods to beef up brain without dementia. Now, do it and keep it will be fine.
Jacob 林志憲
Gardening has very good results to the function which improves your brain, including back up your intelligence and robust your physical power. And I want to introduce about ATRA, The American Therapeutic Recreation Association (ATRA) is the largest, national membership organization representing the interests and need of recreational therapists. Recreational therapists are health care providers using recreational therapy interventions for improved functioning of individuals with illness or disabling conditions. The primary purposes of Treatment Services which are often referred to as Recreational Therapy, are to restore , remediate or rehabilitate in order to improve functioning and independence as well as reduce or eliminate the effectsof illness or disability.
ReplyDeleteTopic: To join clubs is important.
ReplyDeleteI think it’s important for everyone not for elders only. To join clubs will help you accelerate interpersonal relationship, share mood to others no matter happy or grieved. I went to FA(First Aid) club at junior, when I felt depress they encourage and accompany me, at that time I learned ample medical knowledge and made many friends. So don’t be alone is a good way to prevent dementia.
Fareastern,廖昌毅
Topic: Get enough sleep. Studies have shown a link between interrupted sleep and dementia.
ReplyDeleteIf you have good sleep quality, your brain could take enough rest to keep healthy.
Good sleep quality can obtain enough spirit to work and learn.
It also beef up body limit. Let you work on time, sleep is very important for everyone.
When you feel weariness, you can take a nap, and you feel better.
If you feel sleeplessness, Some suggestions can help you:
1. Listening to the music maybe help sleep. Don't listening noise music.
2. You can count sheep in the dreams. one sheep, two sheep, three sheep etc..
3. You can lay out some exercise before you sleeping.
4. Eating medicines help you sleep, but I don't suggest, because medicines maybe harm body.
In the word, you keep good habits, don't stay up all night, you will obtain good sleeping.
Jason 翁哲盛
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ReplyDeleteLearn a musical instrument
ReplyDeletePlaying musical instruments helps us beef up the undeveloped parts of our brain. Generally speaking, it gets more and more difficult to learn things, music included, when you get older. But, for our own good, it’s never too late to learn. Learning musical instruments, we should train both our hands to make tricks. We have to coordinate our brain and hands to do these actions. If we practice it repeatedly, our nerve composition would changes in structrure, and it would accelerate our learning. So, it’s not just fun but also helpful to play musical instruments.
Tobey,莊俊宏
A comment for rita:
ReplyDeleteI can’t agree with you anymore. We use our left hand to train our right brain to keep health , not like left brain with many functions you had said , something such as spatial composition, we need synergy of both left brain and right brain to complete hard works. By the way , emotional control is right brain.
Alex 蘇蔚鴻
Topic:Fruit and vegetables mop up some of the damage things
ReplyDeleteNutritional balance is very important thing for us. Fruit and vegetables contain high levels of vitamins, that are rare in the meat or egg food, if we want to have a healthy body, then we ought to eat fruit and vegetables. Vitamins are essential to maintain good health an important component, they can promote the metabolism, increase the immunity against the disease, and help the absorption of other nutrients. Overall, Fruit and vegetables are indispensable food for a robust humman body, and they could mop up some of the damage things.
Willion 陳言銘
I wanna give a commend to “yuki”
ReplyDeleteTo lay out a trip, you must to figure out every points in the travel include checking way of traffic, where for living, they could beef up many skills of searching information. At the process of travel you will adapt new environment and discover something new. I think the advantages of Travel is getting difference with our life.
Fareastern,廖昌毅
Topic:Eat more fruits and vegetables.
ReplyDeleteThere is ample reason to believe that eating more fruits and vegetables is healthy. For example, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away," says American and "When tomato turns red, doctor's face turns green,"says a commercial.The tomato, which once was considered poisonous, is in fact the source of lycopene a powerful antioxidant that can mop up some of the damage caused by free radicals and fight against cancer and other diseases.
Jamie 黃家瑩
Topic: You will eat healthier food with friends or family.
ReplyDeleteYou will slow down your life steps and spend ample time to eat meals with family or friends. When you eat at home, your parents prepare healthier food for you. Then if you eat with them, it is better than you eat alone or on the go. And you eat with everyone not only benefit your health but also improve sociability. More social let your life become more colorful and more fun. Therefore you don’t have meals by yourself.
Jeff 張競元
A comment for Jason:
ReplyDeleteAlthough I know to get enough sleep is very important, but I always have no enough time to sleep and never feel sleeplessness. I think most of people have the same question to me. How about you? Do you have enough time to sleep?
Jamie 黃家瑩
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ReplyDeleteComment for Jason
ReplyDeleteI am agree for get enough sleep can help your brain. We all need to rest after a tired day. Sleeping can mop up some of damage from body, it also lend you brain to arrange the information by a day. About suggestions to feel sleeplessness, I can tap into music of sleeping, but It is no use by count sheep for me. I think we must to choose the suitable method for yourself.
劉威廷
Topic:Eat more foods containing omega-3 fatty acid
ReplyDeletesome foods like salmon , sardines , tuna is good for our brain because of Ample omega-3 fatty acid.
It is healthy to our bodies and make the blood circulation.
Not only can beef our brain but also make our brain get fresh and increase the immunity to against the disease.
Topic:Paly solitaire or online computer games to accelerate your brain thinking.
ReplyDeleteSuch as Scrabble and Monopoly can not only taxing your brain, but socializing too.
Playing solo games such as solitaire or online computer brain games can be helpful for your brain robusting.
Jack 蘇仕傑
Comment to Amy's post:
ReplyDeleteI agree that get enough sleep. Because enough sleep truth to help many things such as accelerate working efficiency and let event to approach perfect.
Jack 蘇仕傑
Learning is important during all stage in our life. It produces structural and chemical changes in the brain, and education appears to help people live longer. If they do have Alzheimer's, it often becomes apparent only in the very later stages of the disease. It seems like learning doesn't just beef up your brain but also gives you a robust health.
ReplyDeleteWilliam,丘建賢
A comment to Jessica
ReplyDeleteI like the way you end up in your post.
Bring yourself into the article makes
it more interesting for the readers.
However, I have a suggestion. Maybe you can
compose the sentence'She easily got nervous before' and 'She has learned how to stay calm since she became a gardener.
' into one sentence,like 'sentence'She easily got nervous before,but now,She has learned how to stay calm since she became a gardener.
'
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ReplyDeleteTopic：Eat more fruits and vegetables.
ReplyDeleteThere are many researches said that antioxidants might mop up free radical. Such damage like free radical might kill our brain cells, and increase the chance to get dementia. If we can change our live habit a little bit, we might get a lot of health.
Laura, 黃旭瑩
About Jamie's post
ReplyDeleteI like her post very much. She gave us a lot of idioms, and most of those are strong examples. Most of all, it is very fluently.
Laura, 黃旭瑩
Topic:Get enough sleep.
ReplyDeleteSome studies of Cognitive Neuroscience said that when we sleep , brain would secrete some important neurotransmitter , such as Serotonin and Epinephrine. These compounds are relative to our memories and emotion. And some studies in recently ten years also said the most important dormant effect to brain is repair and recovery its needs. By the way , some studies have shown a link between interrupted sleep and dementia. So if you want to make your brain robust and reduce its tax , you should get enough sleep and avoid any bothering things.
reference: http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!VLmvwx.aHxlR02XUwqKIQw--/article?mid=66
Meggie,賴婉蓉
About Willion's post:
ReplyDeleteI think your fluency is great , but maybe you can tell us something about brain instead of body health. I think that will be great and much better. Just like magzine said that ample antioxidants in fruits and vegetables mop up some leading killers of brain cells caused by free radicals.
Meggie,賴婉蓉
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ReplyDeleteA comment to Tony's post:
ReplyDeleteI like the organization of Tony's post. He clearly list a few examples to point out how good hobbies can beef up our brain.
But I feel that the sentence mentioned about the cost might be a little bit digression because there is no context that have relat to it or support it.
陳韻絜, Cindy
A comment to Meggie's post:
ReplyDeleteI agree with your views about get enough sleep could make our brain robust and reduce its tax.
In your article, it mentioned about Serotonin and Epinephrine. I think you can introduce more information about their knowledge, so that we coult know the relationship between them and the brain.For example, through the introduction of the chemical structure of Serotonin and Epinephrine to tell us why they have such an effect.I hope that this will enable your words more persuasive.
Willion 陳言銘
Train Your brain
ReplyDeleteWith getting older, your body accelerates to become weaker and weaker. Also it’s including your brain. You definitely hope your brain is robust to ages. So you need to train your brain. Everyone should exercise their brain frequently in many ways to avoid dementia, a sort of illness you might get with getting older. For example, learning language is effective method. Within studying a new language, you work your brain by making it to go back and forth between one language and another. When you’re trying something new and complicated, it can activate the neurons in your brain.
After all, you shouldn’t let your brain stay dormant when you’re not old, or your brain will sleep forever.
Fay, 謝欣蕙
Topic sentence：travel
ReplyDeleteWhen you travel everywhere, you’re forcing your brain to think the new things all the time. For example, when you go to a new place or country, you can think there cultural characteristics. When you travel, you’re forcing your brain to navigate a new and complex environment. That can beef up your brain.
Peter 謝漢民
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ReplyDeleteAbout Jamie's post:
ReplyDeleteI think the fluency is great. She used many of proverbs to tell us that eating ample fruits and vegetables is healthy. And also she made some exsamples to beef up her topic. So I think her revision is good.
Jeffrey 陳庭筠
For Leana and Carol posts
ReplyDeleteWhen we eat in outdoor we often forget to eat fruits and vegetables, so we have to develop a daily habit of eating fruit or vegetable. It eat ample fruits and vegetables that are healthy to our bodies.
Peter謝漢民
Topic: Listen to more classical music.
ReplyDeleteTo listen to more music has positive effects to people, and there are some researches back up it.Any kind of music can ease neuron of people, but it seems that the classical music has more effectiver than other music. Although the reason is not found, listening to music can make people cheerful and enjoy their personal world. It is also a good deed.
Jeffrey 陳庭筠
Leave a comment to Willion’s post.
ReplyDeleteI think your essay is logical. You gave the answer that why should we eat fruits and vegetables. And you write how fruits and vegetables work on us. All of those points back your essay up. And you did give the conclusion to recall the topic. I think your essay’s layout is pretty well.
Fay, 謝欣蕙
Thanks for Meggie's post.
ReplyDeleteI think she is diligent in learning. She tries to find ample sources to beef up what she says, and at the whole article, she stresses "Get enough sleep" and "Don't interrupt sleep" unceasingly, it's indeed close her main point.
But just like Willion says, although she tells us some scientific studies find the links between interrupted sleep and dementia. It's a general speaking but not a specific after that. Maybe se can give us one example to explain why interrupted sleep associate with dementia. In this way, the article definitely is more interesting.
李玥瑩(Clair)
I want to leave a comment to Jason’s post.
ReplyDeleteHave enough sleep is a very important thing to everyone. It can relax your body’s weariness entirely after a day. And let your brain to rest that don’t need to think anything. I think it have influence seriously for your health. And sleeping quality is also important to you. High quality sleeping can help you sleep better when you use same time. Overall I think enough and high quality sleep can let your life healthy.
Jeff 張競元
Topic:Travel
ReplyDeleteForcing your brain to navigate a new and complex
environment.Went travel in a new and complex environment,I feel relex and funny.
Vicky 李安翔
I'd like to give a comment to Davidmao.
ReplyDeleteDavidmao indicates that some foods like salmon , sardines , tuna containing omega-3 fatty acid,and it help our brain promote blood circulation.I think
it's useful information and show that why some foods
can benefit our brain.And it is the specific part that I can learn and tape into this technique.
Tony,志永
Topic: Any kind of music may work, but there's some research that show positive effects: for classical music.
ReplyDeleteAout the classical music, just like Chopin's Beethoven's compositions etc.
Then how do we to contact these music?
For example, you can buy CDs to listen any kinds of music or go to the piano concert that could help us to contact music.
If you listen on the go, I think that maybe helps us not so much.
We should being in the free time that maybe do beef up our brain.
Those behavior maybe can delay your dementia.
Clapton 高毓斌
Topic: it’s important for your brain that you learn to shut out the stresses of everyday life.
ReplyDeleteNow every-one’s life has a lot of stress, therefore we should learn to shut out the stress. For examples, we can travel to every country, listen to classical music can relax our neuron and ample to sleep that can shut out stresses. This methods are important for our brains.
Clement, 林庭瑋
Comment to Jack's post:
ReplyDeleteI agree that play these games. For examples, Scrabble and Monopoly games that can beef up my brain to think more anything. Let us brains to be smart.
Clement, 林庭瑋
About Peter's post:
ReplyDeleteFirst he proposed the traveling mean, then he illustrated how did we tap into our brain.
His textual relationship is general to example.
But I think that the structure seems to be not so clear.
Clapton 高毓斌
Topic:Develop a hobby or two.
ReplyDeleteWhile we have retired, we sometime play Poker or Mahjong. That will help us develop a robust brain and beef it up. It can also avoid the dementia.
Rex 陳宥任
About Peter's post:
ReplyDeleteI wanna know detills of the cultural characteristics in new place or country. That will be more clearly and trustily.
Rex 陳宥任
Comment to Yuki's post:
ReplyDeleteI think your first sentence is a good opening!Then you gave an example to support your first sentence(general-examples).Finally you gave a summary to support the topic.(Summary)
I think the article is also using some kind of G-L-G skill.(Topic-example-summary)
By the way,I also like traveling.Traveling is a great way to learn ample things about other countries and also beef up my language ability,especially the speaking part.Traveling can also broaden my view.It's a lot of fun to leaen from traveling!
Leana 高儷芬
Topic:Travel
ReplyDeleteYou are forcing your brain to navigate a new and complex environment.For example, when you are traveling, you should think about where you want to go, how to get there, and what you are going to do there.By thinking of all these things, you can beef up your brain.
Eleanor 王盈茹
Topic:Develop a hobby or two
ReplyDeleteHobbies help you develop a robust brain because you're trying something new and complex. When we contact new things, it will fire up neurons in our brain and beef up our head.
Kai 凱成
About Annie's post:
ReplyDeleteI think Annie's post is good. But I have one suggest that the first sentence maybe can writ "developing a hobby or two can relax our brain", then to talk about why and advantage. I think it can let the subject more clean.
Kai 凱成
Topic: Travel
ReplyDeleteTravel is a good way to ward off dementia. When we travel to a foreign country, we can train our brain to stay sharp. Because we are forcing our brain navigate a new and complex environment. For example, we travel to Japan and we can learn some Japanese cultures, like wearing kimono, taking hot spring and seeing the sumo games. All of this can help us to think clearly and beef up our body healthy. So travel is a good way to train our brain to stay sharp.
Howard 吳朗岳
Comment of Rita’s post
ReplyDeleteI agree with your views. At present, many research report pointed out that the right brain is the main control of human intelligence, while the left brain controls the emotions. Therefore, in order to enable a balanced development of personality and intelligence, we can by using the non-dominant hand to beef up our brain.
About Kai’s post:
ReplyDeleteI think he can give us some example for hobbies. I would like to know what hobbies can help us develop a robust brain. And I think the article will be complete.
Howard 吳朗岳
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ReplyDeletethanks for Yuki's post.
ReplyDeleteI think the statement in the beginning is great,and your introductions about the benefits of traveling are very persuasive !
To be frankly,I really want to take a trip now!
Topic:Travel is a good way to beef up your brain.
ReplyDeleteTravel is a good way to beef up your brain.When you go traveling ,you're forcing your brain to navigate a new and complex environment.If you're traveling in a foreign country ,and it's better to beef up your brain .It's because of that you can also work your brain to speak another language.
A comment for Jamie's post:
ReplyDeleteThanking you Jamie's comment.
I have same question. I have no enough time to sleeping.
But this is caused by myself.
Some time I play game all night, or do homework all night.
This is important to plan how do you use a day.
If I have many homework, I can do homework on Saturday or Sunday.
If I feel tired, I have to submit to my body.
When I want to finish, PC game Always attract me. Then I play all night.
When I want to sleep in the daytime, I spend ten minute to sleep after class.
It can raise spirit for me. Let me feel better, and learning effect become well.
So I feel good habit can create good sleeping. Don't be like me who waste time.
Jason翁哲盛
I want to leave a comment to skylatte’s post.
ReplyDeleteBefore we go to buy CDs, we can use internet to visit the website like Youtube to listening the music.
Maybe the timbre is not good, but it's enough to general listeners.
Further, it just needs to go on the internet and dosen't requests more monry for poor student like me.
At least, I think the music could let me to relax after every busy daies.
Jacob 林志憲
A comment to Fay's post:
ReplyDeleteI really agree with the conclusion, “you shouldn’t let your brain stay dormant when you’re not old, or your brain will sleep forever”, because it so warning that everyone dares not to let brain stay dormant and will try their best to keep the brain sharp. However, the writing is too general, for this reason, maybe, you can tell more details about the examples and then the article will be more abundant and interesting.
Maggy, 張郡綸
I'd like to leave a comment to Carol:
ReplyDeleteEat more fruits and vegetables is very important indeed, especially for college students who have to take care our meal for ourselves like most of us, we have to admit that sometimes we don't really care what we eat healthy or not, and not to mention about eat more fruits and vegetables, but like Carol said : "To be a healthy man, everyone should eat ample fruits and vegetables every day.", we should eat more and vegetables for our healthy life.
Stephen 王信夫
Topic:Cardiovascular health is important to brain
ReplyDeleteCardiovascular is a kind of system in our body. It includes blood circulation and lymph circulation, and both of them are important for our health, especially brain. Because that blood can carry fresh oxygen to everywhere in our body, also includes brain. Lymph circulation’s function is like leukocyte, it can destroy a lot of bad germs to protective our body. So if we can maintain cardiovascular health, also help our brain get ample oxygen and avoid germs’ damage.
What can we do for amending the cardiovascular? The most direct and best way is doing exercise. When we doing exercise, like jogging, swimming, playing basketball, we also accelerating the blood circulation and lymph circulation in the same time. That can make blood take more oxygen to our heart and brain and let lymph flow get faster. Besides if the cardiovascular get better can help our brain to beef up and be robust, too.
Cindy,宋芳儒
Topic:Eat at least one meal a day with family and friends.
ReplyDeleteYou can not only remain the good relationship with your family and friends, but also avoid dementia from your friends help. It is a good way for socialize and slow down your life, and try to relax. Just make your life full of joy. That can really beef up and robust your brain.
Lena楊雅迪
I want to leave a comment for 叡呈.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your sharing. And I like to travel, too. I support your suggestion that traveling is a good way to beef up brain. I hope that I can travel around the world!
I have comment about Kai’s post.
ReplyDeleteYour topic is “develop a hobby or two”, but you don’t mention how to do. Seems that you just tell us develop hobby is good for brain. Maybe you can take some examples or write down more details to show us.
Cindy, 宋芳儒
I think Shelley just make a good textual article for us . In her writting , we can see a completely structure of an article,and know how to interpret our title and make it into a perfect writing.She also writing her life experiences that we also have ,and that will make us accept her opinion easy.So , i think she really do a nice work for it
ReplyDeleteTopic:Exercising the opposite side of your brain
ReplyDeleteDementia isn't to belong to the disease of old people anymore. From the news nowaday, many of persons got this illness. So from now on, we can take some exercises of brain that may do well for making our brain to stay sharp. something like practice writing with your non-dominant hand several minutes every day. This can help the part of the less used brain to operate usually. If we do this activity once a day that can make our whole brain to work and beef up its action.
Christina 吳宛霖
I have a comment to Meggie.
ReplyDeleteI had seen many research about the sleep. And any of these articles are talking about how sleep is important. In the articles it also mention that when people sleep 8 hours a day,
the brain would secrete some important chemical compound, and that chemical compound have good effect to brain on its repairing and recovery function. So if we want our brain to stay sharp and far away from dementia. Not only we can sleep more, but also we should keep a good quality of sleep. That is, when we are dormant,make the enviromental around us is good for sleeping.
Christina 吳宛霖
Topic: If you start volunteering now, you won’t feel lost and unneeded after you retire.
ReplyDeleteVolunteering has many advantages for seniors. For example, they can learn more about knowledge, socialize with people and get more sense of achievement by helping someone. When they learned new knowledge or socialized with people, they tax their brain in the same time. It may help seniors to avoid the dementia. So seniors join clubs or organizations that need volunteers not only they won’t feel lost and unneeded but also keep their brain to stay sharp.
Chris 趙中譽
Topic: Make a good sleep quality
ReplyDeleteThere are many studies backing up the worse sleep quality make the higher probability to get dementia. Because our brain keep working when we are awake, even we are doing some entertainment. Overuse brain will decrease it's life span. Only when we are in deep sleep, brain can take a little break. Expert saying that if we listen to music while sleep, some part of brain will keep running for get information. Thus interrupted sleep can effect overuse of brain and cause dementia.
Good sleep quality will let brain get enough rest and help us ward off dementia.
Wing 劉怡君
I would like to give a comment to Annie.
ReplyDeleteAfter reading her post, I think her organization is fluent. She give the main idea at beginning and go into the detail of the reason of her opinion and offer an example to support it, then go back to the main idea at the end. It is a simple but complete article organization. I have a little suggestion for her: those three paragaphs are short and have connective with each other, so I think they can be writted in one paragaph.
Wing 劉怡君
About Cindy’s post, I think her article’s textual relationship is cause-effect. She introduced the cardiovascular first, and explained the link between fresh oxygen and brain’s health. Finally she pointed out the exercise can amend the brain. It is very clear and fluency. I very like it and I hope I can do it as well as her.
ReplyDeleteChris 趙中譽
Topic: Join clubs or organizations that need volunteers.
ReplyDeleteIf you start volunteering now, you won't feel lost and unneeded after you retire. To lay out your old age life, you can fulfill to live and learn. That makes your old age life meaningful.
By volunteering you will try to handle one thing and get along with other people. You have to use your brain to do those things well. The neurons in your brain are stimulated continually,so that keeps your brain sharp.
No matter what, it is worth to join a club and learn from each other who is in it.
Vivian, 許雅筑
About Christina's post:
ReplyDeleteYou pointed out the key point which it's possible that dementia happen in old people else. So we don't just think to beef up the brain until we become old, it's too late for healthy.
And there are many ways about to exercise opposite sides of the brain. I think doing exercise is one of the simple and direct ways. By means of exercising the muscles of whole body, it also works both sides of the brain.
In that way, not only the body but also the brain will become robust.
And it is said that doing exercise makes us feel happy then the brain will produce chemical compound which is good for brain. So let's go to exercise!
Vivian, 許雅筑